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I am me,
The liar and deciever,
The one without reciever,
The non believer.

I am me,
The faithless one,
The rebellious son,
The one without fun.

I am me,
The one who lies,
Who heart it never cries,
Who's soul always dies.

I am me,
The one without caring,
Who's life is never sharing,
Who's innards never bearing.

I am me,
Who I hate to be,
Who dosent see,
Who is never really free.

I am me,
The one who screams for pain,
Who leaves his bloodied stain,
Who cries in the pouring rain.

I am me.
©2006-2009 ~Strika909
:iconstrika909:

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:icondusk-of-angels:
aaah I really like this. awesome structure.

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"Now and then it's good to pause in our pursuit of happiness and just be happy."
HAPPINESS is here!!---> link
:iconraistlindantilus:
This is very similar to an idea for a poem I've had in my head for awhile but couldn't express properly. Bravo. Good Job.

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:iconwaniou:
It's similar to a song I've heard ages ago but can't quite place...

Good though.

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The sum of strangeness and charge = ?
:iconbeautifultemper:
This is very well writen. I would say fav+ . It is wonderfully depressing

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"Held in slumbers soft embrace
She Enters realms of flowery grace,
Where tender love and fond caress,
Bids her awake to happiness"
:iconalwaysinthedark:
it's good! :hug:

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I'll be your pain-killer if you be mine. The world is spinning out of control and I have no where else to go. So won't you cry with me this one last time? I don't think I'll get through it tonight.
:iconphantoms-kitten:
Wonderful. ^_^ I like it.

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Muichimotsu

"Don't blame the heavens. If fate wants you to have something, you will get it; If not, don't bear any grudges." -Kaoru

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